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Doing Wheelies!

Doing Wheelies! By Dane Smith-Johnsen Memaw’s doing wheelies, She must have flipped her lid. She should be knitting blankets. Or babysitting kids- She had the “hee-b-jee-bies.” At least that’s what she said. Just before she hit the gas. And started to skid. Go get the camcorder. One-hundred-thousand wins! Now, that’s a lot of dollars. Soon, taping did begin. Hiding in the bushes, When Memaw passed that way. While doing many wheelies, They videoed her play. Then all of a sudden, She rode toward the bush. One last wheelie- Yeehawww! Then, she landed on her tush!

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Date: 9/8/2009 12:14:00 PM
hahahahahaha quality you lust put a smile on my face, thanks for the welcome coments besos k
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Date: 8/27/2009 12:32:00 AM
Fun write! The stuff that Funniest Home Videos are made of! Cute! Donna
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Date: 8/20/2009 12:43:00 PM
funny and amusing keep writing!!
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Date: 8/17/2009 5:39:00 AM
no... your great! loved reading this again, enjoy your day :)
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Date: 8/17/2009 5:38:00 AM
enjoyed reading that... felt like a kid or something.. im not joking i really enjoyed that, your really good, how did you know what out of pocket meant? :) enjoy your day...
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Date: 8/16/2009 2:39:00 PM
Excellent write, I think she may win. I'm laughing already.
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Date: 8/16/2009 1:45:00 PM
Nicely written humor. Sara
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Date: 8/16/2009 1:20:00 PM
This is wonderfully funny, Dane! Thank you for giving me a great laugh today. I love the images and your writing here is incredibly skillful. A masterpiece of "country road" art! You really have a talent for writing about family members. Now check your email and send me verse one of PJ. I may not have power in a few hours when Tropical Storm Claudette passes over Panama City. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/16/2009 12:55:00 PM
Sounds like you had a lot of fun, untill you landed on your bun! Lol, Moses
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Date: 8/16/2009 12:33:00 PM
Well done Speeeeedie . Hope the " tush " aint too painful !!! .....
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Date: 8/16/2009 12:23:00 PM
This sounds like the tv show..."Funniest Videos" entry!! Hope she wins a Million $$ !!! Cute poem!!
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Date: 8/16/2009 12:02:00 PM
Got a good chuckle out of this one, especially the last stanza. Nice use of language to add flavor to your poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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