Doing Time

I know I did wrong I committed a crime
That’s why I’m here just doing my time
Alone in a room behind a locked door
With stains on the wall and dirt on the floor
Four bars on the window there’s not much to see
For breaking the law looked what happened to me
I miss all my friends and my family as well
For doing wrong I am locked in a cell
One little room with a pan and a sink
You couldn’t imagine ho what a stink
I can’t wait for the day that comes to an end
Why no visits V.O’s I did send
For what I had done I had a lesson to learn
Just sitting and waiting to hear the key turn
I’m telling you this so listen to me
For breaking the law behind bars you will be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/26/2016 11:06:00 AM
TANYA, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT **
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Date: 4/15/2015 10:42:00 AM
THANKS for great comments I look forward to being part of such a friendly community!! I hope my post will be enjoyed by all..... I try write in such a way that they are easy to read and easy understand. as have seen on some other poetry sites some of the words I could not even pronounce let alone understand lol and I find that the way I write they are enjoyed by many.. whatever level of education they may have
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Date: 4/15/2015 8:53:00 AM
You are great for the Soup. Good poetic message. Much Love
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Date: 4/15/2015 10:45:00 AM
Thank you for your most encouraging comment and look forward to posting more and following others and looking forward to reading some fantastic writes !!!
Date: 4/13/2015 10:07:00 PM
Very insightful into a world we hope we all avoid (or never return to). Thanks for sharing, great write.
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Date: 4/15/2015 10:48:00 AM
Thank you your comment it comments like yours ad many others that make writing a great pleasure thank you
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