Doing a Lot Better Now
This is called a Beyond-Haiku, which means it is more syllables and one more line extra…
I’m doing better,
Despite being in Room 6, in Room 6
I’m a go-getter
Even though I don’t feel like taking pics
Better late than never…
Despite being in Room 7, in Room 7
I’m a God-believer
Even though I don’t feel like Heaven
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