Edwin Baldwin Poet Quintain (English)

Dogma

The inner me and the world’s outer me
gray area of a womb full of ghost 
love holds no truth child just hypocrisy 
hate rides and feeds off  their back like a host
unformed god’s of what we spawn the most





God, Ghost and Love 
Contest Judged:  4/15/2011 	 

Sponsored by: Dr.Ram Mehta 

        placed 4th

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2011 at 5:03 AM Congratulations Edwin on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

John Freeman April 16, 2011 at 5:45 PM Great to see you at the top once more Edwin. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored fourth place. Agape, Moses

Gautami Phookan April 16, 2011 at 3:47 AM Super Congrats Edwin on your 4th place win.A brilliant entry..Gautami

Dr Hitendra Mehta April 16, 2011 at 3:46 AM Many congrats Edwin for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

Tahera Mannan April 15, 2011 at 8:51 PM Awesome. Warmest congrats for this super win dear.

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2011 at 6:03 PM YOu are such a deep person, Edwin. A well deserved win . this had to be on the list! Congratulations.

Elaine George April 15, 2011 at 6:01 PM Very profound, Edwin. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 15, 2011 at 4:10 PM Congrats Edwin on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest with this brilliant write luv.. enjoy your top spot and luv your title my friend..happy weekend too..

Sara Kendrick April 15, 2011 at 3:29 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta April 15, 2011 at 8:30 AM Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Edwin

Carol Sunshine Brown April 8, 2011 at 8:11 AM As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such amazing poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Edwin. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire April 7, 2011 at 3:12 PM Thought provoking, Edwin, especially the second line. Much to ponder here. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Carolyn