Dogma

The inner me and the world’s outer me gray area of a womb full of ghost love holds no truth child just hypocrisy hate rides and feeds off their back like a host unformed god’s of what we spawn the most God, Ghost and Love Contest Judged: 4/15/2011 Sponsored by: Dr.Ram Mehta placed 4th

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 5:03:00 AM

Congratulations Edwin on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/16/2011 5:45:00 PM

Great to see you at the top once more Edwin. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored fourth place. Agape, Moses

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/16/2011 3:47:00 AM

Super Congrats Edwin on your 4th place win.A brilliant entry..Gautami

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/16/2011 3:46:00 AM

Many congrats Edwin for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/15/2011 8:51:00 PM

Awesome. Warmest congrats for this super win dear.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2011 6:03:00 PM

YOu are such a deep person, Edwin. A well deserved win . this had to be on the list! Congratulations.

Elaine George

Date: 4/15/2011 6:01:00 PM

Very profound, Edwin. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2011 4:10:00 PM

Congrats Edwin on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest with this brilliant write luv.. enjoy your top spot and luv your title my friend..happy weekend too..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2011 3:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/15/2011 8:30:00 AM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Edwin

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/8/2011 8:11:00 AM

As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such amazing poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Edwin. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/7/2011 3:12:00 PM

Thought provoking, Edwin, especially the second line. Much to ponder here. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Carolyn