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Dogma

The inner me and the world’s outer me
gray area of a womb full of ghost 
love holds no truth child just hypocrisy 
hate rides and feeds off  their back like a host
unformed god’s of what we spawn the most





God, Ghost and Love 
Contest Judged:  4/15/2011 	 

Sponsored by: Dr.Ram Mehta 

        placed 4th

Copyright © Edwin Baldwin | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/19/2011 5:03:00 AM Congratulations Edwin on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 4/16/2011 5:45:00 PM Great to see you at the top once more Edwin. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored fourth place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/16/2011 3:47:00 AM Super Congrats Edwin on your 4th place win.A brilliant entry..Gautami Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 4/16/2011 3:46:00 AM Many congrats Edwin for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 4/15/2011 8:51:00 PM Awesome. Warmest congrats for this super win dear. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/15/2011 6:03:00 PM YOu are such a deep person, Edwin. A well deserved win . this had to be on the list! Congratulations. Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 4/15/2011 6:01:00 PM Very profound, Edwin. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/15/2011 4:10:00 PM Congrats Edwin on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest with this brilliant write luv.. enjoy your top spot and luv your title my friend..happy weekend too.. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/15/2011 3:29:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/15/2011 8:30:00 AM Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Edwin Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/8/2011 8:11:00 AM As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such amazing poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Edwin. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/7/2011 3:12:00 PM Thought provoking, Edwin, especially the second line. Much to ponder here. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Carolyn Login to Reply