Dogging

She was a good dog but at times
she could be a ,
like the way she would look back
when I called her
with a certain demeanor, perhaps borrowed
from my ex-wife.
I wonder sometimes about old souls
and totems and all the other
confusing mishmash that folks
fall back on when a dog looks at you
as if it were taking you for a walk,
and you had better try
a whole lot harder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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August 4, 2020 at 4:42 AM
...giant sheltie as in not shrunk into toy’dom? Dog nerd. I have met a sheltie that was “big” like they used to be. Fine animal, way less annoying than the little barkers.
Ashford Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 7:20 AM
Yes, twice the size of a normal small Shetland sheepy, more like a boarder collie! Still had all the Sheltie traits though. No lap dog! e
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August 3, 2020 at 5:11 PM
Hah! Sounds like my first dog. I know where ‘that’ word got it’s use. I swear she literally rolled her eyes at me once. When she got real old I used to tell her “my next dog’s going to like me”. Of course, she taught me so well I look after dogs for a living now.
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August 3, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Hey PT, glad you're a dog lover. Girl dogs (especially giant Shelties) can be a little uppity. Thanks for the comments!
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