Dog Park

She had stove top burners for eyes,
and every word she spoke bubbled
over slowly as if someone had left
her
                        too warm for me to get close.
 
My gestures were tepid and careful,
like a small boy meeting a strange
dog, alone in a park. Calm and reserved.
I presented compliments as if they
were the back of an open hand for 
her to sniff, and my lips shook.
 
                                     Afraid that she would bite.
 
She merely growled in disbelief;
A rabid jeer at the quiet remark of
an untrustworthy captor. 
 
She saw me as a threat,
but never turned away.
We were two animals
looking for comfort;
afraid to be burned
and yet too hungry to
let go of the flames.
 
-James Kelley 2013, All rights reserved.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 15, 2013 at 6:10 PM
James What a creative and unique write about the longing for love and the emotional toll it takes to find it. You did a great job at portraying how two lonely souls feel and want for one another,. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Mystery Man poem. I try and tell a story with my writes.
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December 15, 2013 at 6:17 PM
I'm glad you like it. I wasn't sure about it after I finished it, but people that have read it seem to really enjoy it. Funny how the things that you've written that you like the least, can sometimes get the most attention haha. You're welcome for the comment, I truly enjoyed it.
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