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"Laying out" was my actual life style every summer until about three years ago when I simply had no time for it and I realized it was too risky to keep doing it so much. I would even catch the rays until Halloween time if the sun stayed strong till then! Those were the days!! It was worse when I was much younger and out boating with my husband every weekend!

Dog Days of Summer

From June (when the summer has just begun)
till August, I sizzle under the sun.
I bathe underneath it, soaking it in,
and even in fall, I will not be done!

The first days of autumn cannot defeat
my unbridled passion each day to greet
sun rays still blazing in autumn’s blue sky.
Through Indian Summer, I relish sweet heat!

Dog days of Summer, don’t give up on me.
Keep on through October, for I will be
basking in sunshine as long as I can -
and were it possible – eternally!

Written Sept. 30 and posted Oct. 1, 2018
for  the 'The Dog Days Endure' Poetry Contest of Gregory Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Messina Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 5:52 AM
I think someone likes the beach(lol) Lovely write Andrea! Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Happy Holidays :) Charlie
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 5:52 AM
I think someone likes the beach(lol) Lovely write Andrea! Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Happy Holidays :) Charlie
Bellam Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 1:08 PM
I too love the seasons you've expressed so beautifully. I love the sun, the rain, and now in October the early darkness when I can see the moon and stars above my head. Bob
Gondolf Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 8:56 PM
One can’t help but love the warmth of the sun. Nicely written, Andrea, best of luck. John
Kiser Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 10:15 PM
I haven't sunned since I fell asleep in the sun, when I was in college, while studying for exams. Had sun poisoning so bad that my legs split open and took over a year to heal. I do highly recommend aloe juice if you're a sun-seeker; rub in on liberally; it's very healing and as a drink. Still, I hate to see summer go; keep penning.
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 12:22 AM
I got very badly blistered on my chest the first day at the pool in mADRID when I was 18. I got fever and chills. I think I spent four hours in midday sun. I worry about that area of my body now. I do not do tanning any more but effects may haunt me in the future.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 9:43 PM
The warmth of the sun feels so good, but I have to be careful or my skin cancer will return. I enjoy it in moderation. A lovely entry Andrea. : )
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 12:23 AM
yes, I only get sun now when I walk my dog a few times a week or driving to work, using sunglasses and sunscreen on my face!
Beaufort Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 8:09 PM
It does feel good to soak up the warm rays. I used to a lot. I miss it now.
Cunningham Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Lovely verse Andrea, a bit of sun does you good but in moderation. Good luck. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 12:29 AM
yes, I think 10 to 20 min late afternoon would be perfectly fine but I don't even have time for THAT any more. I wonder if driving 40 min a day gets me the sun!!
Leffanta Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Despite the pharmaceutical industry propaganda, a daily dose of sunshine is essential to good health - and good eye site, so enjoy your lifestyle! Aloha! Rico
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 12:26 AM
Sadly, when I was getting all that sun, my body still had very low level of Vitamin D . When I got cancer (not skin cancer) I began eating super healthy and taking lots of supplements. My Vitamin D level is now at 57. Before it was only 13 (with sun). In my own case, I think it is all about diet!!
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Your affinity for the sun comes through in your words. A poem of longing for the season..wonderfully written. Best for a win, Andrea.
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