Dog Days

Dog days pass slowly air is thick but there ain't no miracle waitin funnel cloud on horizon and we’re still in Kansas, friend.

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Casarah Nance

Date: 8/29/2014 9:35:00 PM

Made me think of the wizard of oz. I've never been to kansas, I'd be afraid of the weather. good tanka though, I like this form, its still pretty new to me, but it says so much in so little.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/30/2014 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Casarah, yes the form is new to me as well but is interesting in that it allows just a little more than haiku.

Joseph May

Date: 8/12/2014 10:01:00 PM

Well penned Dave...

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/13/2014 7:29:00 AM

Thanks Joseph