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Dog and Hog Went To Town

The dog and the hog went to town There were no critters around It was a mistake Got slapped by a rake Ran back to the country so sound.

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Date: 11/15/2019 6:24:00 AM

'Ran back to the country so cool', wow! back to where comfort lies without noise and air pollution.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/15/2019 12:53:00 PM

The country is still a haven for me.

Date: 11/6/2019 6:41:00 PM

Yes, they needed to get themselves back to the country!! that's for sure.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2019 7:07:00 PM

I feel the country is always a "haven".

Date: 11/6/2019 6:28:00 PM

Haha, there's a predicament.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2019 7:07:00 PM

But they figured it out, I am proud of them for that.

Date: 11/6/2019 8:02:00 AM

Seems they were easily frightened off.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2019 12:22:00 PM

They were finicky.

Date: 11/6/2019 3:27:00 AM

Delightful story dearest, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2019 7:15:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios.