Dog and Hog Went To Town

The dog and the hog went to town
There were no critters around
It was a mistake
Got slapped by a rake
Ran back to the country so sound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Amankwah Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 6:24 AM
'Ran back to the country so cool', wow! back to where comfort lies without noise and air pollution.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 12:53 PM
The country is still a haven for me.
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 6:41 PM
Yes, they needed to get themselves back to the country!! that's for sure.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 7:07 PM
I feel the country is always a "haven".
Kiser Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Haha, there's a predicament.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 7:07 PM
But they figured it out, I am proud of them for that.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Seems they were easily frightened off.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 12:22 PM
They were finicky.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 3:27 AM
Delightful story dearest, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 7:15 AM
Thank you Demetrios.
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