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Dog-Tired

Walk dog 
In fog

Can't see
Bump tree

Fell down
Face frown

Sore head
Cut bled

Now lost
Bit cross 

In pain
Slow gain

Came rain 
More bane

Wet through
Cold blue

Mud slip
Pulled hip 

Found path
Mad laugh

Walk more
Still sore

Long roam
Got home

Deep sighed 
Dog-tired

Red wine
All mine

        05.11.20

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Peter Dome Date: 12/8/2020 9:56:00 AM Haha. love it!. Hope it's not true of course so clever and visual. well done. Take care. Pete. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 11/7/2020 10:58:00 PM Love these, Emilia, so cleverly written. Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 11/9/2020 4:06:00 AM Thank you so much Harry, happy that you enjoyed them, Emilia : )

Gershon Wolf Date: 11/7/2020 6:16:00 PM Cute story, remarkably penned in footle form... Enjoy the wine! : gw Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 11/9/2020 4:03:00 AM Thank you Gershon, love the footle, the wine went down a treat lol, Emilia : )

James Inman Date: 11/7/2020 5:33:00 PM I don't know whether to laugh or cry with you Emilia. Nicely done. Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 11/9/2020 3:59:00 AM Thank you James, Either or both is fine, I cry and/or laugh at myself often as I do tend to get myself in quiet a few predicaments lol, Emilia : )

Panagiota Romios Date: 11/6/2020 4:07:00 PM Love these, Emilia.. Pangie xxx 2nd comment))) Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 11/7/2020 1:41:00 AM Thank you again Pangie, hope you are keeping well, Emilia : )

Silent One Date: 11/6/2020 4:05:00 AM You did these really well Emilia... Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 11/6/2020 2:58:00 PM Thank you Silent One, is a form I seem to be more comfortable with, Emilia : )

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/6/2020 12:59:00 AM I see you've got the bug Emilia, great string of footles. Tom Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 11/6/2020 2:57:00 PM Thank you Tom, first one was a while back then suddenly two in a row which is a bit like our buses lol, this was a little bit longer originally but then decided to shorten it, Emilia : )

Susan Ashley Date: 11/5/2020 9:22:00 PM A fun and fantastic set of footles, Emilia. I enjoyed the journey.. I don't blame you for keeping the red wine for yourself ;) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 11/6/2020 2:51:00 PM Thank you Susan, I don't normally drink all the wine but felt I deserved it this time lol, thank you for stopping by and commenting, Emilia : )

Panagiota Romios Date: 11/5/2020 5:46:00 PM Darling FOOTLES, Emila.... Grand job! Pangie ee Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 11/6/2020 2:47:00 PM Thank you Pangie, I had a roll with the footles with writing two in a row, pleased that you liked this one, Emilia : ) xx

Lindsay Laurie Date: 11/5/2020 3:22:00 PM Hello Emilia … a fun set of footles that tell your predicament very well indeed - thanks Emilia - Lindsay Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 11/6/2020 2:44:00 PM Hi Lindsay and thank you, even the unlucky days don't put me off doing the things I enjoy I tend to try laugh them off and carry on. Emilia : )

Jan Allison Date: 11/5/2020 3:08:00 PM oh I love the ending with wine not whine after the fall, fun string of footles:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 11/6/2020 2:37:00 PM Thank you Jan, I have been known to walk into branches of trees and have slipped in the mud many times, I am quiet an accident prone person and that is before any wine lol, Emilia : )