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Does Love Not Bleed

Does Love Not Bleed Her bleeding heart - unnoticed…..if only the roses hadn’t been red. ©2/5/2018 submitted to Roses are Red – one liner – Poetry Contest sponsor – Alexis Y.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2018 12:56:00 PM

Beautiful, John. Very unique take on the challenge. Congrats.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 2/15/2018 5:09:00 PM

This is so deep John, congratulations on ur first place

Jan Allison

Date: 2/15/2018 8:53:00 AM

Unique take on the theme John congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2018 3:34:00 AM

- Congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/14/2018 7:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, John!.. Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`*

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/14/2018 12:43:00 PM

Hi John, Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY:-) ALEXIS

John Lawless
Date: 2/14/2018 5:19:00 PM

Thank you Alexis, it was a very interesting theme...using a one liner to capture the heart of valentines day.....in a rose.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2018 9:12:00 PM

wow, this one is Deep and I love how you employed the rose image!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2018 9:12:00 PM

Ha, the captcha was NRA

John Lawless
Date: 2/10/2018 10:14:00 AM

the theme was Roses.....Andrea.....not Guns and Roses....that is kinda funny though....

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/6/2018 9:54:00 PM

Ah someone should have paid more attention to her heart!

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/6/2018 12:38:00 PM

Poetry seems to be an intricate part of your life. You can take the simplest of concepts and make magic with words that breaths life into them. Well done my friend, Emile.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/5/2018 10:18:00 PM

I love this potent ink. My best to you in the contest, already a winner for me :) xomo!