John Lawless Poet Monoku

Does Love Not Bleed

Does Love Not Bleed

Her bleeding heart - unnoticed…..if only the roses hadn’t been red.


©2/5/2018


submitted to Roses are Red – one liner – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Alexis Y.

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Line Gauthier February 18, 2018 at 12:56 PM Beautiful, John. Very unique take on the challenge. Congrats.

Lewis Raynes February 15, 2018 at 5:09 PM This is so deep John, congratulations on ur first place

Jan Allison February 15, 2018 at 8:53 AM Unique take on the theme John congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2018 at 3:34 AM - Congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper February 14, 2018 at 7:36 PM Congratulations on your win, John!.. Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`*

Alexis Y. February 14, 2018 at 12:43 PM Hi John, Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY:-) ALEXIS John Lawless February 14, 2018 at 5:19 PM Thank you Alexis, it was a very interesting theme...using a one liner to capture the heart of valentines day.....in a rose.

Andrea Dietrich February 7, 2018 at 9:12 PM Ha, the captcha was NRA John Lawless February 10, 2018 at 10:14 AM the theme was Roses.....Andrea.....not Guns and Roses....that is kinda funny though....

Andrea Dietrich February 7, 2018 at 9:12 PM wow, this one is Deep and I love how you employed the rose image!

Kim Rodrigues February 6, 2018 at 9:54 PM Ah someone should have paid more attention to her heart!

Emile Pinet February 6, 2018 at 12:38 PM Poetry seems to be an intricate part of your life. You can take the simplest of concepts and make magic with words that breaths life into them. Well done my friend, Emile.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 5, 2018 at 10:18 PM I love this potent ink. My best to you in the contest, already a winner for me :) xomo!