Does It Matter

Does it matter if she doesn't know
I worked all week and paid the bills
The kids have clothes and school supplies
shouldn't I deserve a break?
Then again I made a promise
One I've made so many times
And one I've broke so many times
When does it hit the breaking point?
Ten days
Longer than most
Shorter than some
But back at day one
what does any of that matter?
I'll swear right now
Just like I have to her so many times 
that bottle will be the last
But I bought two.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 20, 2026 at 9:20 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 25, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Johnny B., Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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