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DOES HE Does he touch you with deep cabernet dreams, or is it all white wine passion? does your heart race from his nearness? is there surrender in his scent? does he tempt you? does he leave you breathless? are you tantalized with jalapeno kisses, like butterflies stinging spicy pleasure on your inner thighs? does he entice you? do you feel wicked and waxened? do you scream bruja's incantations moan verses of ancient runes? is your ****** seismic? does he read like a mystery with a hint of gypsy blood? does he consume you? can he make you laugh in color? does he feed your madness calm your storm? does he feel betrayed by your shadow? is he envious and jealous of your light? does he sit in stillness while you listen to your muse? does he make you feel whole? does he? does he? i once did! didn't i? 2/6/18

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Date: 5/3/2018 10:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this bittersweet love poem.
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Date: 5/3/2018 3:01:00 PM
great poem and so beautifully expressed with emotion. Thank you for entering and congratulations on your placement...be blessed :)-luloo
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Date: 2/12/2018 7:13:00 AM
'.. can he make you laugh in color? does he feed your madness calm your storm? does he feel betrayed by your shadow?' So many quotes one could grab from this graphic poem. Yet, in its way - and resulting the final two phrases - a finely worded, deeply felt or imagined lonely sadness.
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Judge Santiago Burdon
Date: 2/13/2018 7:35:00 PM
Thanx

Book: Shattered Sighs