Doctor's Wishes

I wish I could visit
the vacant crystal palace
of your solitude;

to hover 
just one inch 
above your body's coma;

to cauterize
the thugs assailing you

to direct
this story's ending
with the end of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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