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Doctor's Dilemma

DOCTOR’S DILEMMA
A doctor who practiced in Maine, Began to experience pain. Called himself out, Diagnosed gout, Exhaustion and muscular strain. For doctors it doesn’t look neat, Getting worse than patients they treat. He couldn’t wait, In such a state. Just retired, his life’s work complete 10 January 20129 Limerick II poetry competition Sponsor Joseph May

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Date: 1/10/2019 9:16:00 AM
Good rhythm,rhyme and content, Bryn. I wonder though if you meant to write : For DOCTORS it doesn’t look neat, Getting worse THAN patients they treat. Best wishes Wendy
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 1/11/2019 8:42:00 AM
I SURRENDER!!!
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 1/10/2019 3:46:00 PM
Well spotted, Wendy. I checked it once, I checked it twice. I should have asked for your advice! I'll have to re-submit it Thank you Bryn

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