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Dark Side of the Sixties peace brother hey man i just scored some bennies it’s really far out i’m speedin like a mother wanna buy some you won’t get busted i know this cat who’s tight with the pigs was rappin with this dude about the draft he couldn’t get 4f so he’s gonna split for canada can you dig it his chick is really bummed about it she’s really tuff stacked too i got 4f by fakin insanity got a heart condition anyways where was i oh yeah went to their pad smoked a whole f-ckin lid of gold we got stoned out of our gourds wanna buy some you won’t get busted cause i know this cat who’s tight got any coffee think i’m comin down you got any bennies on you oh yeah sh-t i forgot i got some right here … anyway what was I gonna oh yeah we all took a hit of blue blotter i was like trippin for 12 hours straight it was cool for awhile then snakes started crawlin out of their mouths and maggots were squirmin in the ceiling jesus came through the wall pointed his finger at you know who and said i was goin straight to hell cause i wasn't a christian the fire started melting my chair dig it asked them to pull me out they said i was just spaced out ya know like havin a bad trip ya know… so he shot me up with some smack to kinda mellow me out know what i mean wanna buy some i know this cat who’s tight… what’s wrong brother yeah i know i can’t stop talkin must be the speed am i making you nervous want me to clean up your pad i got a sh-t load of energy i gotta get something done yeah i know need ta calm down guess i oughta shoot up you cool with that far out i got a lighter you got a spoon got any on you oh yeah i forgot here goes… good dope man oh yeah that’s it... holy SH-T what a...RUSH can-i-like crash at your pad you cool-with that hey-you wan buy some-i need da bread man i-really do need some bread -- man hi – need…….. . Decade: The Sixties Submitted for: Deb Guzzi's contest Sixties slang: --------------------------- Scored – Bought Bennies - Amphetamine pills Far out - Awesome Speeding - High on Amphetamines Busted - Arrested Pigs – Police 4F – Physically unfit for the military Chick – Girlfriend Tuff – Good looking Stacked - Big-breasted Pad – House / apartment Lid – Ounce Gold – Acapulco Gold, Marijuana Coming down – Drug wearing off Blue Blotter - LSD Smack – Heroin Rush – Feeling the first strong effect of a drug Crash - Sleep Bread - Money

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Date: 6/26/2015 5:31:00 PM
You know I missed the genius of this. DUH! You were writing like you were on speed! I'm fixin' it! now-Congrad's on your win! Light & love
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/27/2015 4:15:00 PM
Thanks cher! Yes, that was the intent of the language used with no punctuation. etc. and of course the end was about the heroin kicking in and the resulting overdose...
Date: 6/25/2015 11:58:00 PM
sweet win. PD
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Date: 6/25/2015 11:41:00 PM
Tim, Congrats on your "Talk the Talk and Walk the Walk WIN." **SKAT**
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Date: 6/15/2015 10:10:00 PM
scariest part. I understood the words of this poem perfectly. hahaha!!!
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Date: 6/15/2015 2:28:00 AM
:) SKAT
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Date: 6/15/2015 2:06:00 AM
Painted beautiful and fascinating Tim, good luck in the contest........A.M.
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