Do You See My Star

Oh
                                                   pretty 
                                               star, sparkle
                                    cosmic, rose-sequined soul
                          chirping in grooves stained with limestone
                           agarbatti paints on scarlet stars, nascent
                                wrapped in real purple burial steel
                                   dream ceased to revive nerves
                                         where adorned trials 
                                            are woven curse
                                        opalescent    ice drops
                                       violet                   heart    
                                      beat                       crown          
                                     moon                       melt in
                                     dawn                           mist
                                     stars                             glint
                                      **                                 **
                                       *                                   *

3rd place contest winner

Written: May 22, 2023

A Brian Strand Premiere No 1219 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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