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Oh pretty star, sparkle cosmic, rose-sequined soul chirping in grooves stained with limestone agarbatti paints on scarlet stars, nascent wrapped in real purple burial steel dream ceased to revive nerves where adorned trials are woven curse opalescent ice drops violet heart beat crown moon melt in dawn mist stars glint ** ** * * 3rd place contest winner Written: May 22, 2023 A Brian Strand Premiere No 1219 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 5/31/2023 2:24:00 PM
Love that you made it into a star! Congrats.
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Date: 5/26/2023 2:47:00 AM
Creativity proving to be better and best as time goes. Congratulations dear friend on your great placement.
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Date: 5/26/2023 1:07:00 AM
Wonderful shape, Sotto, congratulations:)
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Date: 5/23/2023 5:43:00 AM
Very creative poem my friend. Awesome design.
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Date: 5/22/2023 11:25:00 AM
- Lovely star poem and shape, Las :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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