Do You Really Love Me

You tell me you LOVE ME
and you wana spend the REST OF YOUR LIFE WITH ME
but then you say YOU ARE UNSURE
So do you really LOVE ME
or is just a PHASE
because you been alone for so long
do really LOVE ME
or am I just a past by
Sometimes I dont know
Because you show me so much 
GOOD AND BAD
you think the little things dont COUNT
but they do
you dont look at LIFE the way i do
so you'll never UNDERSTAND
unless you open up yours EYES
are you willing to give ME YOUR LAST
are you willing to give me your HEART, MIND, SOUL then your BODY
or are you just enjoying this short RIDE
UNTIL someone new come alone
are you willing to LOVE ME
till DEATH do us apart
till the SKY TURN BLACK
and the MOON FALL
or you just living for the MOMENT
UNTIL I get old
sometimes I dont know
and sometimes It's POINTLESS of askig you
because you think most thing I say is dumb as hank
but TIME will tell 
if you REALLY LOVE ME
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/27/2012 7:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Martica. This week has flown by. I hope you enjoy your weekend and find the inspiration to write some more during this time. Love, Carol
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