Do You Know I Love You

You are a beautiful dream come true
But it’s almost impossible for me to talk to you
and I’m cursed with tongue tied nerves

I ask,                       “do”     you understand
What it is                “you”    do to me
Did you                  “know”   I think about you always
I sit and I stare and    “I”    dream
And wish to say I   “love”    you
But I just stare at    “you”    and beam (like an idiot mind you)




written by Rebecca Larkin
for HGarvey Daniel Esquire poetrysoup contests
=)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rozario Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 10:12 AM
very nicely done Becca...i see you actually won with this one...great job indeed. love this piece...:)
Givein Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 11:06 PM
clever cute!!! Congrats =]
A   Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 3:26 AM
REBECCA,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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February 8, 2012 at 10:42 AM
Dear Rebecca, a Hearty Congratulations to YOU for YOUR Win in my Contest "Middle of the Road" I Think YOU should have said "like" (a LOVESICK) "idiot mind you" Great Pen Thank-YOU for Supporting my contest LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege... Harry (HG)
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 5:41 AM
A belated congratulations to you on your win in HG's "Middle Of The Road" contest Rebecca. Love, Carol
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February 5, 2012 at 3:19 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
Breidenthal Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 12:52 PM
Great one definetly! - David
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February 5, 2012 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on your Rebecca place well deserved x
Breidenthal Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 1:10 AM
I love it!!!!! :D :D Best of luck! Always, Laura
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January 27, 2012 at 7:30 PM
nice! i love it! :) -linda
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