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Do You Know I Love You

You are a beautiful dream come true But it’s almost impossible for me to talk to you and I’m cursed with tongue tied nerves I ask, “do” you understand What it is “you” do to me Did you “know” I think about you always I sit and I stare and “I” dream And wish to say I “love” you But I just stare at “you” and beam (like an idiot mind you) written by Rebecca Larkin for HGarvey Daniel Esquire poetrysoup contests =)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/23/2012 10:12:00 AM
very nicely done Becca...i see you actually won with this one...great job indeed. love this piece...:)
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:06:00 PM
clever cute!!! Congrats =]
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Date: 2/12/2012 3:26:00 AM
REBECCA,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/8/2012 10:42:00 AM
Dear Rebecca, a Hearty Congratulations to YOU for YOUR Win in my Contest "Middle of the Road" I Think YOU should have said "like" (a LOVESICK) "idiot mind you" Great Pen Thank-YOU for Supporting my contest LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege... Harry (HG)
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:41:00 AM
A belated congratulations to you on your win in HG's "Middle Of The Road" contest Rebecca. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2012 3:19:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:52:00 PM
Great one definetly! - David
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Date: 2/5/2012 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your Rebecca place well deserved x
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Date: 1/28/2012 1:10:00 AM
I love it!!!!! :D :D Best of luck! Always, Laura
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Date: 1/27/2012 7:30:00 PM
nice! i love it! :) -linda
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