Do You Hear What I Hear, Question Mark

The carol singers at my door,
I greeted them with tone deaf song,
My hand outstretched, they shuffled off:
I didn’t get a quid – what’s wrong?

Do you hear what I hear? For Kim’s Carolling contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/8/2013 4:47:00 PM
Jack, congratulations in Kim's "Here We Go A Caroling " contest.. a fun poem with flow... always~ PD
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Date: 1/8/2013 10:36:00 AM
;) Conrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/8/2013 9:21:00 AM
Loved the humor, Jack! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/8/2012 11:12:00 PM
Jack, wow...you scared them off....enjoyed..pd
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Date: 12/3/2012 7:15:00 PM
hahaha. I really like your humor. Did you ever see Mr. Bean's Xmas video, the way he greets the carolers? It's hilarious. well, I saw you had emailed me but I've got no time for emails tonight, I can't even finish my poetry comments. Joe does not start till tomorrow. He had to retake health test today. See ya. Andrea
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Date: 12/2/2012 8:37:00 PM
Ha ha, you just can't sing my friend! Oh well, neither can I, I really stink at it as does my whole family save my sister maybe! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/2/2012 1:57:00 PM
best wishes in Kim's contest my friend ..
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Date: 12/2/2012 1:56:00 PM
hear ya Jack luv .. excellent entry ...so good to see u here again luv .. miss u ..
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Date: 12/2/2012 10:30:00 AM
oh good giggle material xx
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