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Do You Hear Them

Do you hear them in the dark sky; voices.
Can you see them? They're in the moist cold wind. 
Strong feverish passionate rant noises. 
It's pined and forced behind, on a whirlwind.

Autumn leaves move violently beaten.
Dancing deaf, blind, moving incoherent. 
Storm; up, in, and under midair wheaten. 
Wave, tossing, not surrendering errant. 

Pedals follow upward like flaming tongues. 
My love, can you see them? A kiss it asks. 
It asks, my love, you my love, fireworks, comes. 
A thousand sums and more under the mask. 

It takes breath from our lungs; they mean no harm. 
I need be back into your open arms.
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January 3, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Ah, very beautiful - "It's pined and forced behind, on a whirlwind, Autumn leaves move violently beaten" powerful phrasing
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