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Do You Have Answer-Shades

The shades of “blues” might have an intense wavelength. It literally overshadows her “colorful seasons”. This school champion might already realize this. Games are not that easy in this "normal world." An imperfect design never fits into the Fine System. It never fails to tell her how bad she is in this. It might be her first criticism. She push herself hard, in this race of Infinite Perfection. Sometimes running, chasing, breaking. Even pleading never going to works. It's not that easy. Right? The more intense she gets, the more she sags and breaks. but she is still too imperfect to get pity on her. What she tries to do? does she collect the shattered pieces? that was over-walked by many without even noticing. What… sudden gray shades in the weather? ooh….! I think rain is going to come. It is one of an intense, heavy rain. Why does she still crawl over there? Wait.. what shading her? Is that wings, that she folded before leaving school? Wow…! It's almost rusted, what red shades on it ? Oh, my god, I think we caught. Hi...…! "May I fly again?"

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Date: 10/14/2023 5:48:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Aswitha Panneerselvam
Date: 11/9/2023 7:52:00 AM
Thank you so much ..!

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