Do You Care

On the high way
My side mirror recalls
The object that appear
Are closer then 
They seem to be…
Yet so close we are
Taking destiny for ride
Many are a head and 
Many behind, on road
Wondering in this city.
Tales of 1000 souls
I am one of them with little
Blessing to share. 
My believe, My Prayers 
To Lord, is driven by Job
My Visa, my rent, my bills
Run in the veins of my day.
Morning, I do open my eyes 
Only to report to job, 
My wife, my children and my God
Await my return by night.
I recall not, what I did last night
When I slept, what my wife said,
Not even my child’s smile
Yet my 9 to 5 schedule is perfect
Morning open with coffee on gas stations
Traffic on highways, on city road
Fines and radars, mobiles and overspend
Frustrated yet have to drive a head
Slow in fast lane with mobile on ear
Or lady, prejudice it may seem
But I recall it in my car, another
Guy flying in his accord, reads a sign
“just cruising”, damn with smile.
Switching between channels, 
Some jams, some songs to hear
Discussion VoiceBoards, interviews
Money minutes, gold rates
Some blast, some peace deals
What a way, to say Good morning.
Yet hope I am not fired today, 
As the morning news did say recession 
Job cuts and job losses, long leave
Companies disappearing, stocks diving
Face book blocked in offices
Looks a gloomy day.
Yet hope drives my day, a head
Beyond my reach some time
I finish my job, drive home,
Just a pleasant look on my child
A warm welcome from my wife
Makes me human from machine.
Taking deep breath of relieve 
I thank God, for all His mercy
And pray for Goodness tomorrow
And wish for all those left jobless
Lay in the arms of  beloved
I dream, with hope for better
Tomorrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/29/2011 12:57:00 AM
I agree. Such creative words and expression. I just love reading your set of poetry. Excellent.
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Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/29/2011 1:20:00 AM
dear laura, there is dream of every poet to have his work read and his words appreciated and thank you for fulfilling my dream every letter of your comment is valuable, wishing you a wonderful time regards .musafirs
Date: 5/23/2011 6:30:00 AM
a precious piece of poetry Azim and most creative words express so very much longing inside and depth of tomorrow luv.. super write..
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Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/29/2011 1:18:00 AM
Thank you Linda, for sucha lovely review and encouraging & valuable comment. wishing you a lovely time regards .musafrs
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