Do we qualify

Feeling from heart, thoughts rested, our awareness
rejuvenates pulse of soul, ever present 
in the background, yet cognised in staid stillness …
   for those who listen.

Cultivating gentleness, firm our focus,
rapture rises, brought forth by kundalini,
Divine Mother’s caress of sublime delight …
   for souls who are pure.
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Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 6:47 AM
Good to see you step out into a sapphic stanza. Enjoyed.
Seeker Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. It is just an experiment. I don’t have the expertise to navigate stressed vs unstressed syllables ..
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