Do We

If a whole life is to be lived, one day at a time. Through age comes wisdom, do we eventually refine Or do we bitter with age, allowing our black to show Then we haven't really lived, to allow our halo's to glow

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 9:40:00 AM

James, thank you for the reply...Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/31/2014 1:18:00 AM

a thoughtful write from a sensible person.. :) I do hope we'll have a halo and not horns and tail

James Fraser
Date: 8/31/2014 10:29:00 AM

Amongst the many poems I've written, quite a few are similar to this one. More so related to Nature, and what man is doing within her peripheral. Many thanks for your kind words Olive, James :) :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/30/2014 12:30:00 PM

Always missed and always welcome, how's the good ole UK are we going to have an independent Scotland? Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my verse so often. Light & Love

James Fraser
Date: 8/30/2014 12:59:00 PM

Time will tell Debbie, Sept 18th isn't far away now, and I'll be voting a big YES. Thanks kindly for the visit, James :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/29/2014 8:59:00 PM

ohhh, so wisely scribed... you will live to enjoy life, prince!.. a beauty!... huggs

James Fraser
Date: 8/30/2014 12:43:00 PM

Thank you Princess, hugs back :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2014 3:14:00 PM

Hi James, do we dare... love this set. one day at a time. I agree! Linda

James Fraser
Date: 8/29/2014 4:12:00 PM

Thank you kindly Linda. Have a most lovely weekend, James.....