James Fraser Poet Couplet

Do We

If a whole life is to be lived, one day at a time.
Through age comes wisdom, do we eventually refine

Or do we bitter with age, allowing our black to show
Then we haven't really lived, to allow our halo's to glow

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Poet Destroyer A September 2, 2014 at 9:40 AM James, thank you for the reply...Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 31, 2014 at 1:18 AM a thoughtful write from a sensible person.. :) I do hope we'll have a halo and not horns and tail James Fraser August 31, 2014 at 10:29 AM Amongst the many poems I've written, quite a few are similar to this one. More so related to Nature, and what man is doing within her peripheral. Many thanks for your kind words Olive, James :) :)

Debbie Guzzi August 30, 2014 at 12:30 PM Always missed and always welcome, how's the good ole UK are we going to have an independent Scotland? Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my verse so often. Light & Love James Fraser August 30, 2014 at 12:59 PM Time will tell Debbie, Sept 18th isn't far away now, and I'll be voting a big YES. Thanks kindly for the visit, James :)

Nette Onclaud August 29, 2014 at 8:59 PM ohhh, so wisely scribed... you will live to enjoy life, prince!.. a beauty!... huggs James Fraser August 30, 2014 at 12:43 PM Thank you Princess, hugs back :)

Poet Destroyer A August 28, 2014 at 3:14 PM Hi James, do we dare... love this set. one day at a time. I agree! Linda James Fraser August 29, 2014 at 4:12 PM Thank you kindly Linda. Have a most lovely weekend, James.....