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Do the Bogeyman

The Orion 
has arrived!
On board the 
Flagship,
RearAdmiral 
Mickael,
Eternal Dark 
Man on the 
bridge,
And his 
Ladyship 
PrincessLadyJewel,
His 
bodyguard of 
a thousand 
blades!

He came to 
tame and 
conquer the 
carrions,
Blood sucking 
humanoids of 
the terra 
vista race,
They even 
fed on 
themselves 
and their 
friends,
Neither 
conscious nor 
intelligent to 
communicate 
or trade,
How do you 
win against 
the soulless 
one?
They do 
possess a 
weakness in 
their spiked 
defense,

Look for their 
durian head 
leader and 
dance,
For god sake 
not the 
Saturday 
night fever!
Nor the 
moonwalk or 
criss cross 
jump-jump!!
They are 
cousins of 
zombies do 
the 
bogeyman,
And than 
you'll see all 
of them fall 
down,
Quickly now 
before they 
wake eat the 
leader's 
brain.

What 
happens 
next?. . . 
To be 
continued.  . .Ha 
ha ha ha ha 
ha Ga za and 
wait. . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/29/2013 9:52:00 AM
The first two stanzas seem to belong together; I felt like I was aboard the Starship Enterprise for a moment, then we seemed to switch gears and I felt like I was in the middle of an Insane Clown Posse song. But, in any event, I enjoyed the sci-fi feel, and I appreciate the urban feel you bring to your poems, even if it seems a bit disjointed in this piece. You are a very talented individual, no doubt about that, though :)
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Date: 8/13/2013 3:04:00 PM
I liked the joke about Saturday Night Fever in here. heehee!!!
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/14/2013 1:15:00 AM
Andrea thank you so much, you are right and still a few more
Date: 8/13/2013 10:06:00 AM
tripping fantastic, danesh... is there a sequel or prequel to this, anakin?.. grrreat write!..:)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/14/2013 1:13:00 AM
Thank you so much. . . Nette there's sure is Episode II at a theater near you. . . .

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