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Do Not Stow Your Life Away

Do Not Stow Your Life Away Do not stow your life away Or stray in some godforsaken play Nothing worth having is just given away Do not look the other way Embrace with open heart What now seems the hardest part And should you get carried away Or even lost in any way A nudge, a touch I will apply Night and day on me you can rely For it is you, my child, Who forges firm untied This precious life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/9/2017 10:18:00 AM
Beautiful message, Anne-Marie. So true.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/9/2017 3:36:00 PM
I'm glad you liked the message Agnes :)
Date: 4/8/2017 1:39:00 PM
Good Afternoon Anne-Marie. Hi. Allow me to say So let it be said so let it be written so let it be done. This is motivational. You are you hear you roar. Honestly. Well done entirely. The title was brilliant and is brilliant.
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Date: 4/9/2017 3:35:00 PM
One more time, Lisa, I am honored by your laudatory comments. I was just attempting to show encouragement and support :)
Date: 4/8/2017 2:49:00 AM
What a beautiful message Anne-Marie :) So uplifting and strong, embracing. ..
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/9/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Darren for your kind comments :)
Date: 4/7/2017 11:40:00 AM
Beautiful write Anne-Marie, a wonderful message gracefully relayed. 7! xomo
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/7/2017 12:20:00 PM
"Maureen, I'm so happy you liked it and thank you for your generous rating :) Amitiés"
Date: 4/7/2017 7:22:00 AM
A beautifully uplifting and encouraging poem of hope and always facing forward knowing someone will be there for you. Wonderfully done Anne Marie
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/7/2017 10:37:00 AM
Thank you so much for this lovely review Chris. I hope to always be an encouraging force without being over protective.
Date: 4/7/2017 7:16:00 AM
That last stanza carries home you message... Lovely
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/7/2017 10:32:00 AM
I am so glad you liked it. I've had this little poem sitting there for days, waiting to be released but I was missing one word: 'untied'. It finally came yesterday. It is so hard to let go . . .
Date: 4/7/2017 7:04:00 AM
- An uplifting and lovely poem, never forget to live ... enjoy the day ... no one knows what tomorrow will bring, Anne-Marie :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/7/2017 10:30:00 AM
Thank you so much for this lovely review. I was trying to give my kids some encouraging words; they are now young adults and have a lot of important decisions to make, and, as a parent, it is sometimes hard to be supportive without interfering with their lives.

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