Do I Need To Tie You Tighter

He’s out there again. I turn my head, but there is silence.
Are you sure it’s the same guy? I look but they have disappeared.
What do you think he wants? I inch myself to the window and move the curtain.
Don’t do that! A voice shouts.  Shh! I say, peeking out a sliver of glass.

There is a car, but I do not see a man. Maybe they have imagined it.
“What are you doing?” I jump from fright. “Nothing,” I say.
My abductor glares at me. “Do I need to tie you tighter?
I release the curtain.  His eyes stare at me. He is making a decision.

He will kill you tonight, a voice says. I do not doubt it. I believe it actually.
If we untie you, do you promise to run? The other girl asks.
They have been here longer than I have been here, but neither run.
I wonder about this, and about the guy they supposedly see out the window.

How can you see out the window through the wall? I ask them.
We are dead, one says. That’s how we can untie you.  Psychically.
I am shocked, for I know they are right.  I blocked their bodies out.
Not able to stand the truth. I let myself sleep, waiting for the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcferran Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 9:11 PM
This is so creepy!! :O (Not a criticism, actually "well-done creepy"! ;D)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Soul Sister, there is nothing you could say that would make me think you did not mean good-creepy. SMILE.
Lee Sr. Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 11:35 AM
Tell the truth I think you just watch an old episode of Alfred Hitchcock... Think I'm getting up off the recliner and double lock the windows and doors... Ha Ha James
Krutsinger Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 12:08 PM
I think you should. Omaha is not so far away.
Wolf Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 6:19 PM
Whoa! You really had me going there! Riveting! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 11:11 PM
I like to throw in a little weird story once in awhile to see if the reader friends here are awake.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:27 PM
This is suspenseful and scary Caren. You never know what you will really do if this kind of circumstance arises. I have been in a very scary situation and prayer got me out of it. So I know what I would do...pray! This is written so well. Kudos! xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 11:12 PM
I know that is the way I have gotten myself out of scrapes also. Never this one thank goodness.
Matt Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:00 PM
This is way cool and scary at the same time. I must say your writing exceeds brilliance ~Phatt
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 11:12 PM
What a marvelous comment! I am so GLAD that you stopped by my new best friend!
Kiser Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 1:43 PM
Whoa, scary story! Reality's experiences are way more frightening than any movie. Well done.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 11:13 PM
Thank you M.L. I rewrote this many times, trying to get it to the "exact right amount of scary". Not wanting you to scream, but wanting you to think.
Romios Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 11:24 AM
What an imagination! PR
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 12:48 PM
I truly like my scary stories.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 8:30 AM
This gave me chills. Great storytelling!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 9:59 AM
I like to keep people on their toes.
Mcgee Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 8:21 AM
You always surprise me! This one is like a nightmare and I want to know if you wake up...
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 10:00 AM
I put myself in "their shoes" knowing there are people out there in this predicament.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 1:08 AM
Shocker. Wow. Awesome story - You should write it into a short story for publication. Blessings
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:41 AM
Thank you so much Regina. I appreciate this.
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