Do I Love You

Do I love you?
I'm not so sure
if I love you anymore.
If I need to ask,
what does it show?
That the answer
must be no?
Have I wasted all these  years?
Washed them away
in a river of tears.
What an utter fool 
I've been.
I wish I saw
what others had seen!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/3/2014 12:02:00 PM
I second what Darren says Jenny and if wasn't for you I wouldn't be here and having the time of my life - men pah if they can't see what an amazing beautiful lady you are they aren't worth writing about. Give up on the creep move on to someone who will love and cherish you my friend you are as precious as diamonds only a fool would fail to see that. Hugs Jan xxxx
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 6/3/2014 8:24:00 PM
Oh my dear Jan,you are way too kind but thank you so much hun xxx big hugs right back at ya xx
Date: 5/30/2014 1:54:00 PM
I had the same thoughts.. Did I waste all these years. Remember you wouldn't be the person you are today if you didn't go through what you did...hugs Tim
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 6/3/2014 8:22:00 PM
Thank you for your kind and wise words Tim.xx
Date: 5/29/2014 10:29:00 PM
If you could see what I see , Your eyes would not believe the beauty .
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 6/3/2014 8:21:00 PM
Aww,Thank you. x
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