Do I Do That To You

holding on for dear life struggling for a breath though my throat is tight. 
one touch from you is like a brand new day 
your here now its all ok. 
you make my every dream come true you make my heart stutter
and I wonder 
do I do that to you
you smile and im on a different world. you stroke my cheek and im your girl
im putty in your hands though you make no demands
you make my every dream come true and I wonder do I do that to you
do you catch your breath when I come close 
do you forget it all when im here
you make my heart stutter and you make my every dream come true
now tell me do I do that to you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/3/2014 1:21:00 PM
One Would Imagine That Yes You Do Do These Things Unto The Heart Whom You Love...Churning Deep Inside Turning Tides Taking Hold Her Volcano: BAM....Your Ability At Powerful Yet Subtle Rhyme Is Quite Wonderful; Good Job...Love, Jeremy
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Date: 4/2/2014 9:56:00 AM
I love this, do I do that to you....a question that bears a lot of emotion, care and love....Nyce
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