Do Explain

I wish there where 
Words to tell ,
Feelings too share
Just something to throw in the air
    Yet it's blank
With nothing to explain
The silents we share
Words untold 
Unsolved mysteries
Gone cold.
Can't seem too 
Open and speak
Stood silently 
And weeped
Pray to God
To fix the troubles
Yet nothing
Trying to come up with 
     Something
And yet nothing 
Is this 
The end 
Explaining is as if I were 
Dying
Where finally fading
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 27, 2014 at 10:38 AM
First I'd like to say I liked your poem a lot. 2nd, just out of curiosity Is this about a divorce or maybe a break-up? If it is I do see positive in it still cause said fading at the end and faded isn't gone. If I'm way off on what this poem was about, no spilt milk right and either way it was a good strong poem. have a good day and try an be positive Tony Dean
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September 27, 2014 at 10:39 AM
you said faded is what I meant
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