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I wish there where Words to tell , Feelings too share Just something to throw in the air Yet it's blank With nothing to explain The silents we share Words untold Unsolved mysteries Gone cold. Can't seem too Open and speak Stood silently And weeped Pray to God To fix the troubles Yet nothing Trying to come up with Something And yet nothing Is this The end Explaining is as if I were Dying Where finally fading

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Date: 9/27/2014 10:38:00 AM
First I'd like to say I liked your poem a lot. 2nd, just out of curiosity Is this about a divorce or maybe a break-up? If it is I do see positive in it still cause said fading at the end and faded isn't gone. If I'm way off on what this poem was about, no spilt milk right and either way it was a good strong poem. have a good day and try an be positive Tony Dean
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Tony Driskell
Date: 9/27/2014 10:39:00 AM
you said faded is what I meant

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