Notes About The Poem
Humanoid means like a human..Or another word for the apes especially monkeys..

Dna Akin

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                                             DNA akin
                              Somewhere humanoid  boundary...
                                       Mind, will, emotion


Contest:Natural and Beyond!
Sponsor:John Freeman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 29, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Congratulations Sara on your big win...this is very nice.
Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John, Sara
Muzzey Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Congratulations Sara on your second place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Devonshire Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 2:56 PM
Very perceptive poem, Sara. We're still trying to see where that boundary is. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
Williams Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 1:26 PM
hey Sara, congrats on a great win, David
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 7:31 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 11:31 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great work.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 11:22 PM
Congrats Sara on your wonderful win with this poignant piece for the contest my friend..luv..
Nair Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 10:06 PM
congrats on the win, jag
Jones Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 9:28 PM
Wow, Sara. This one knocks my socks off! whole lotta wholatta in this one. wtg in the contest! Happy eve ~N
Freeman Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 9:16 PM
DNA akin in love for sure, Sara, as I think you would agree. Congratulations on your second place. Agape, Moses
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
August 24, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Intriguing ... A lot said with little word. Rendered pondering! Thanks for your commentng on some of my work and i'm glad too that you liked it.
Culverhouse Avatar
August 24, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Must be on Laverne's side.....hehe!! How are you this am? Good morning!! cheers and a cup of brew!!
Pickett Avatar
August 24, 2011 at 10:44 AM
Well Sara I've been away awhile, and you just keep getting better and better...Love it..God Bless. Taz
Williams Avatar
August 24, 2011 at 4:18 AM
hey Sara, talking volumes in short words, love it, good luck, David
Sweetheart Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 10:48 PM
excellent .. three lines to ponder and dwell upon .. good luck in the contest with this dynamic write Sara ...
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 10:46 PM
Interesting one, SAra. I am not sure, but I think you were were supposed to do two? Hope you are having a good day. Time for tv. haha! Luv, Andrea
Susan Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 9:05 PM
good question. what is the boundary? a terrific entry. good luck!
Kershaw Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 7:03 PM
Sara, I have no doubt that we are related and that our long tailed cousin is embarassed by the relativity. Well done as always. Love, Will
Sivey Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 6:16 PM
Wow, this one is deep. You've got my mind percolating and thinking! Great write again, Sara!!
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