Dizzy Dancin

Morning sun shining bright
White lace curtains blowing in the wind
Open your eyes child of love
Your best days bout to begin
Silver hair is far away, now it shimmers in the sun
Anticipation in every heart beat
This is the day you'll meet the one

The one who haunts your dreams
The one whose face you can't see
But they twirl you round and round
Dizzy dancin to the drums that pound
Dizzy dancing to the strumming sound
They lift you from the ground 
spin you round and round and round
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Cunningham Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 11:20 AM
A lovely tribute Crystol, I'm sure she'll do you proud. Doesn't seem long since my three daughters were at home, now they've all flown the nest Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Your "Dizzy Dancin" is a wonderful write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Enjoy your blessed/fun day writing away..............
Woods Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Ty Paula! Xo
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 8:03 AM
- A lively lovely poem, Crystol :) - hugs
Woods Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Ty ! Xo
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March 30, 2025 at 7:27 AM
A most uplifting resonating poem! xomo
Woods Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Thanks! Xo
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