Dizzy

I've been waiting,
  anticipating,
  contemplating how it would be
  to be reeling
  with the feeling
  of your passion
  crashing down on me.

Make me dizzy with your kisses,
  dizzy with your love.
Don't be lazy.
Drive me crazy,
  crazy with your love,
  crazy with your love.

We'll feel the heat
  when we meet.
Hot blood rushing in,
  swelling lips,
  moving hips,
  make me dizzy with your love.

Hold me close.
Lay me down.
Make me dizzy with your love,
  dizzy with your love,
  dizzy with your love.

Kiss me here.
Kiss me there.
Make me dizzy with your love.
Put your hand in my hair.
Make me dizzy with your love.

Drinking wine,
Feeling fine,
  so dizzy with your love.
Holding tight,
  letting go,
  so dizzy with your love,
  dizzy with your love,
  dizzy with your love.
  


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  July 21, 2016
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Great catchy lyrics Carol I hope you can get it set to music it would be fun to hear the finished article:-) hugs Jan xx
Duet Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 6:25 PM
Thanks, Jan, but I broke my keyboard! :(
Logan Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 7:56 AM
May not be among the best poems ever written but as lyrics go, my opinion is excellent.
Duet Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 8:35 AM
Thanks, Keith. I agree...it's now really what I consider a poem either. It's a rock/pop song! (In my head anyway) lol
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