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Vultures vomit scraps of my festered heart as they feast upon bodies of the past. My mind shakes as I watch their souls depart. The luminescent world now overcast. Alone with corpses, wishing I wasn't last. My conscious is frozen here for years. I pray to escape upon vacant ears. Yet the universe has decided my fate. My memories with them turn into smears. Now I can only wait by death's gate. ~ 12/13/19

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Date: 1/14/2020 10:22:00 AM
Deep and very emotional heartfelt write, Alyssa. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/13/2020 8:30:00 PM
Oooh this is a great write, imagery and metaphors off the charts, congrats Alyssa on a great win!
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Date: 1/12/2020 1:51:00 PM
very powerful one with the feelings you evoke with your images, Alyssa. Congrats on a top win.
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Date: 1/11/2020 12:45:00 PM
Back to say congrats on your win, Alyssa, I knew this one would do well. John
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Date: 1/11/2020 12:04:00 PM
awesome metaphors, which is exactly what I wanted! Great poem sweet Alyssa...Congratulations on your placement and thank you for your participation. x:-)-luloo
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Date: 12/14/2019 12:09:00 PM
This is so wonderfully penned, Alyssa, I can feel the deep emotion within. I believe this should do well in the contest, best of luck. John
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Date: 12/14/2019 4:41:00 AM
Wow! This is exceedingly well written, Alyssa. It is frighteningly real!
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