Winged Warrior Poet Dizain

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Dizain Contest

Oh sweet stench of death, kiss my lips thy night…

Release me from thy clutches of loves’ rot,

Unchain my soul from loves’ barbarous byte…

Where heavens display their hells and have fought,

Only to bleed bated tears in their fraught;

Be gone thy feverous eternal eyes…

Euthanize my sorrows in glutted guise,

Seal my sacrifices in twilight tombs…

Where thy demon daggers of love chastise,

And thus bringing me back to wakeful wombs.



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Rhyme Scheme: A-B-A-B-B-C-C-D-C-D



Dec.11.2019

Placed 1'st...Thank You

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John Hamilton January 13, 2020 at 8:43 PM What a dynamic dirge you have spawned WW wow...look at the effect your poem has caused me to utter poesies. Congrats bud on another win!

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2020 at 2:01 PM I enjoyed HEARING this one being read, WW. Very poetic. Congrats for your win.

Beautiful Scars January 11, 2020 at 12:07 PM you can't get better than this sweet WW - you never cease to amaze me! You have such a way with words. I am always happy to see you enter my contests. Congratulations on your placement and thank you for your participation. x:-)-luloo

Alexis Y. December 12, 2019 at 12:17 PM Hi WW, This is a good entry for the contest theme. I was going to enter this contest, but I changed my mind because I didn't want to experience those sad feelings again. You did an excellent job with the given topic. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy Holidays Bro- Alexis

Hello There December 11, 2019 at 8:01 PM Death will not deliberate, my friend. You must stay to the very end... and mend. This piece is amazing!! So heavy, so well-written, so powerful! Good luck in the contest, ^WW^!! Winged Warrior December 11, 2019 at 8:13 PM Ya, I know...but it helps you from paying taxes lol...love you HT...I'm still on a bit of a break...later agitator lol...^WW^ ;o)

Na Na December 11, 2019 at 7:45 PM Nicely done W.W. best of luck in the contest. dont forget to have the title be Dizdain Contest. and dont put the sponsor at the bottom. Just trying to help Na Na December 11, 2019 at 8:26 PM Thank you. I am best at not following rules lol and not placing so Now I will help others :) Winged Warrior December 11, 2019 at 8:09 PM Thank you, my friend...I have corrected it...best wishes to you Gregory...^WW^ :o)