Diwali 1

DIWALI

After the heat and then the rains
As a cool quietude starts to reign
Bringing into fraught lives more glee
Comes the day of lights, Diwali

Time, on fireworks and feasts, to splurge
Love, joy and hope finding a surge
Nights turn light’s veritable sea
During the time of Diwali.

The oil bath ritual  helps restore
Nerves sore, bringing love and peace more
‘Good quells evil’ is what we see
As  the message of Diwali

Even those who’ve got to borrow
And the ones caught in mild sorrow
Whatever their private woes be
Joy to them too, come Diwali.

For the famished and the homeless
The day remains  just as hopeless
Their bellies get a fill rarely
For them it's empty Diwali.

Written :02/Dec/12

Diwali is India's Festival of lights.
Form : Kyrielle (Quatrains with 8 or 10 syllbls, Rhyme Sch:aabB, ccbB, ddbB, eebB.)

Second place in Cyndi Macmillan's Season of lights contest( Dec 2012, judged on 7 jan 13)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 11:52 AM
Jag, Congratulations, on your own favorite poem. Stay Xool *xox* Forever LINDA
Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Interesting and informative. Congratulations on win. Love, Joyce
Stephens Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 12:39 PM
Hi, An uplifting powerful glow shines forth from your lovely vision of Diwali. Regards Theresa xx
Mehta Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 7:41 AM
It was a pleasure to read your best and favorite poem. Congrats on the win, nair
A. Sharma Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 2:36 AM
Very Well written ! Congrats on great win !!
Mehta Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Well-penned poem and congrats on the win, nair
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 4:49 AM
Congratulations as always Jag xx
Puddifoot Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 5:40 PM
I remember reading this one before, jaggy, deceptively simple but as I look deeper I find the wordplay (rains/reign) and internal rhyme that is typical of you - congrats on your win in my contest sweetie :)
Gangabissoon Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 5:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nice read :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Great flow to this winning work..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats..Sara
A   Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 4:56 PM
JAG, a nice SEASON OF LIGHTS a nice & warm CONGRATULATIONS, with your win is a DELIGHT & ENLIGHTENMENT in OUR GLOBAL COMMUNITY (contest)... keep up the good work... always~PD
Liwayway Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 4:28 AM
Congratulations on your grand win friend Jag!! Happy New year! :)
Johnson Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 4:34 PM
A lovely poem about Diwali and the way of celebration. congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 3:00 PM
Love hearing about Diwali, and the rituals that are celebrated! A wonderful poem,...hearty congratulations to you!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 10:08 AM
what a nice repeating line about Diwali. So lovely. Congrats on your win.
Puddifoot Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 4:39 PM
this is so nice jag, it's always interesting to learn about different cultural celebrations, good luck in the contest! your visits are special too :)
A   Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 1:54 PM
Jag, wishing you the best in Cyndi's contest... loving the joy to come...always~PD
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 9:04 AM
Hi Jag I like this alot and I understand a bit more abut Diwali now as well xx
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