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Divorce

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Divine days lost Into the years, eaten by the Vultures that took our flame. Onwards tomorrow, we´ll have Rememberings to step out. Capturing our life together...! Exam failed by you and me.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2024 4:55:00 AM

eaten by the Vultures that took our flame…Captivated by the final line especially. That raw feeling of failure… Congratulations on your impressive placement!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/18/2024 5:45:00 AM

Thanks a lot Kim. Have a nice day!

Matt Caliri

Date: 1/17/2024 9:44:00 PM

Congrats Maria on placing 4th out of 49 entries! My favorite line "eaten by the vultures that took our flame." Amazing.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/18/2024 12:23:00 AM

Good morning Matt. Ahhh....What a surprise! Thank you so much and also for your lovely comment. Have a great day!

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/15/2023 6:40:00 AM

You have skillfully painted a vivid depiction of an exquisitely crafted Acrostic, Maria. Love, the ultimate truth, occasionally eludes our grasp as we fixate on illusory shadows rather than embracing the luminous essence.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/15/2023 12:37:00 PM

Dear Sotto, thank you so much for your kind words. You are very right. Well, this is my first acrostic, it's just a trial. Have a nice evening!

Karen Jones

Date: 12/15/2023 12:21:00 AM

I like this. Very original. Good luck in the contest.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/15/2023 1:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Karen. Have a blessed day!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/15/2023 12:11:00 AM

Love alone is real and yet sometimes we look at shadows and not the light

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/15/2023 1:37:00 AM

You are very right Unseeking. Thanks a lot for passing by and leaving your comment. Blessings!

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/14/2023 4:13:00 PM

il n'y a pas d'amour heureux a écrit le poète français Aragon, thanks maria for the emotionnal sharing

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/14/2023 4:18:00 PM

Merçi bcp Yann. Est ce que tu as aimée?. J'ai essayé le acrostic. La première fois. Bon nuit