Maria Fernandez-Garcia Poet Acrostic

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Divorce

Divine days lost
Into the years, eaten by the
Vultures that took our flame.
Onwards tomorrow, we´ll have
Rememberings to step out.
Capturing our life together...!
Exam failed by you and me.

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Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2024 at 4:55 AM eaten by the Vultures that took our flame…Captivated by the final line especially. That raw feeling of failure… Congratulations on your impressive placement! Maria Fernandez-Garcia January 18, 2024 at 5:45 AM Thanks a lot Kim. Have a nice day!

Matt Caliri January 17, 2024 at 9:44 PM Congrats Maria on placing 4th out of 49 entries! My favorite line "eaten by the vultures that took our flame." Amazing. Maria Fernandez-Garcia January 18, 2024 at 12:23 AM Good morning Matt. Ahhh....What a surprise! Thank you so much and also for your lovely comment. Have a great day!

Sotto Poet December 15, 2023 at 6:40 AM You have skillfully painted a vivid depiction of an exquisitely crafted Acrostic, Maria. Love, the ultimate truth, occasionally eludes our grasp as we fixate on illusory shadows rather than embracing the luminous essence. Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 15, 2023 at 12:37 PM Dear Sotto, thank you so much for your kind words. You are very right. Well, this is my first acrostic, it's just a trial. Have a nice evening!

Karen Jones December 15, 2023 at 12:21 AM I like this. Very original. Good luck in the contest. Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 15, 2023 at 1:36 AM Thank you so much Karen. Have a blessed day!

Unseeking Seeker December 15, 2023 at 12:11 AM Love alone is real and yet sometimes we look at shadows and not the light Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 15, 2023 at 1:37 AM You are very right Unseeking. Thanks a lot for passing by and leaving your comment. Blessings!

Yann Rolland December 14, 2023 at 4:13 PM il n'y a pas d'amour heureux a écrit le poète français Aragon, thanks maria for the emotionnal sharing Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 14, 2023 at 4:18 PM Merçi bcp Yann. Est ce que tu as aimée?. J'ai essayé le acrostic. La première fois. Bon nuit