Trudy Schrader Poet I do not know?

Division

Division, collision
We are on a course to drown
We don’t want those stinkin’ sinners
To bring our glory down

Division, in vision
We must get salvation back
Our churches look like whore houses
And our saints are on crack

Division, provision
We must trust our God to build
He’ll give us towers of  power
If we are careful to tend His field

Division, revision
We must weed out the control
We need to tweek the rules just a little
So that deception won’t show

Division, collision
Our house has two sides
One is for our perfect appearance
The other is where we hide

Written by Trudy Schrader on 05-18

Note: I can't stand religion...relationship is where the LOVE is! I've been working on my
own style. Hope you all like it.

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Virginia Frayer February 5, 2011 at 8:37 PM Wonderful choice of words and all flows together rather well... great write~Virginia

Carol Sunshine Brown January 20, 2011 at 8:00 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Trudy. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Trudy Schrader January 20, 2011 at 3:47 AM Thanks for the praise...I'm a Leo, well, 'nough said. I swear, I would read and write poetry all day if the State didn't own me from the buttcrack of dawn til 6pm. trudy

Dr.Ram Mehta January 20, 2011 at 3:19 AM The last quatrain sums up your expressions completely enjoyed the write, Trudy. Very much impressed.

Robert Pettit January 19, 2011 at 7:57 PM You have good descriptiveness and rhyming throughout this presentation.