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Divinity of My Love For You

I was dwelling in my sad poetry till you brought the romanticism trespassing my dark world... you began to paint love your soothing words calmed the sea in my heart my faith returned with this golden light....[ your words] I see a beautiful world you and I by the river side singing in the valley our songs of love won't you grace me this dream that I have build on the hill where our children are playing in the field I shall make you sleep in my arms pour on you all my love and charm ! my love you are my last wish ! as ur a RIVER and I am your FISH........... To the most lovable person in this world !

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/29/2016 11:41:00 AM

truly red deep beautifully penned piece i would dare say he is proud of your love excellent write wishing you a blessing of a day

Chhutan Dey

Date: 5/24/2011 9:38:00 PM

The poem proclaims love,full to the brim...nice expressiom. Thanks fr ur comment on my poem honey!

Red Fiery
Date: 5/24/2011 11:33:00 PM

thanx brother

John Aaron Green

Date: 5/24/2011 4:23:00 AM

it is a deep emotional release, and a wonderful poem, and your soothing words calm the sea of my heart, i loved it...and it was great to hear the real sound of your voice,,,,,lol.........

Michael Wayne

Date: 5/23/2011 4:02:00 PM

No fish can write like you do! I hope the river is long and peaceful and pleasant, everything you dream of.

Red Fiery
Date: 5/23/2011 5:22:00 PM

THANKS FOR YOUR GOOD WISHES..''WINKS''

Dawn Mclaughlin

Date: 5/23/2011 2:56:00 PM

I really love this Romantic and Loving :)