Divinity of My Love For You

I was dwelling in my sad poetry

till you brought the romanticism

trespassing my dark world...

you began to paint love

 

your soothing words

calmed the sea in my heart

my faith returned

with this golden light....[ your words]

 

I see a beautiful world

you and I 

by the river side

singing  in the valley

our songs of love

 

won't you grace me this dream

that I have build on the hill

where our children 

are playing in the field 

 

I  shall make you sleep

in my arms

pour on you 

all my love and charm !

 

my love you are my last wish !

as ur a RIVER and I am your FISH...........

 

 

To the most lovable person in this world !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/29/2016 11:41:00 AM
truly red deep beautifully penned piece i would dare say he is proud of your love excellent write wishing you a blessing of a day
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Date: 5/24/2011 9:38:00 PM
The poem proclaims love,full to the brim...nice expressiom. Thanks fr ur comment on my poem honey!
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/24/2011 11:33:00 PM
thanx brother
Date: 5/24/2011 4:23:00 AM
it is a deep emotional release, and a wonderful poem, and your soothing words calm the sea of my heart, i loved it...and it was great to hear the real sound of your voice,,,,,lol.........
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:02:00 PM
No fish can write like you do! I hope the river is long and peaceful and pleasant, everything you dream of.
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/23/2011 5:22:00 PM
THANKS FOR YOUR GOOD WISHES..''WINKS''
Date: 5/23/2011 2:56:00 PM
I really love this Romantic and Loving :)
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