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Diving In a Hypnotic Trance

Moon smiles and night palls a velvet blue veil, And owls and curlews hail with a flirting tale; Xylophones and cymbals bounce for our dance, So come sweetie; let’s dive in a hypnotic trance. *Place 10* in the following contest (judged on Sept. 20, 2020) Aug. 29, 2020 Rithimus Divisa 5 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory R Bardon Original poem: A Time For Us to go merry-go-round, posted on 8/16/20 for the contest, "A Time For Us" Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Date: 9/20/2020 4:30:00 PM
Lovely 4 lines, Newton. Many Congrat's on your win. ~ Elaine
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/20/2020 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Elaine, for this kind comment!!
Date: 9/20/2020 2:12:00 PM
this is really fun, Newton! Filled with delight. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 9/20/2020 2:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 9/20/2020 10:47:00 AM
I loved the mid sentence rhyme you had here and the flirting of the birds a swell tale! Congrats on your top placement.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/20/2020 12:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit, Jeanne, and the great comment!!

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