Newton Ranaweera Poet Rhyme

Diving In a Hypnotic Trance

Moon smiles and night palls a velvet blue veil, 
And owls and curlews hail with a flirting tale; 
Xylophones and cymbals bounce for our dance, 
So come sweetie; let’s dive in a hypnotic trance.

*Place 10* in the following contest (judged on Sept. 20, 2020)

Aug. 29, 2020
Rithimus Divisa 5 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Gregory R Bardon 


Original poem: A Time For Us to go merry-go-round, 
posted on 8/16/20 for the contest, "A Time For Us" 
Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Elaine George September 20, 2020 at 4:30 PM Lovely 4 lines, Newton. Many Congrat's on your win. ~ Elaine Newton Ranaweera September 20, 2020 at 5:25 PM Thank you so much, Elaine, for this kind comment!!

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 2:12 PM this is really fun, Newton! Filled with delight. Congrats on the win. Newton Ranaweera September 20, 2020 at 2:37 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!

Jeanne Mcgee September 20, 2020 at 10:47 AM I loved the mid sentence rhyme you had here and the flirting of the birds a swell tale! Congrats on your top placement. Newton Ranaweera September 20, 2020 at 12:38 PM Thank you so much for your visit, Jeanne, and the great comment!!