Diving

Surrounded by water.
         Moving along with
the creatures of this land
   and following
a crab on the ocean floor.

Your body feels alive,
         suspended in the green water,
            as the rain falls on the surface,
bending the light
    this way and that.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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