Divine Providence

Ruminating over a golden era gone by and over possessiveness filled me with nostalgia
Ultimate luxury of vying for a car as well as owning a chauffeur driven one was
Sadly for the migrated rulers who ruled over another dynasty across oceans
The massive Ford drove into grandpa's driveway in the early forties
Exactly thirty years later it stood dark, forlorn, inviting rust under the banyan tree
Devoid of its master whose ashes were bestrewn within the old British Raj bungalow

Benign weather peeled off layers of its glossy makeup despite its bare upkeep; our
Undulating frustration as it drank too many gallons; moleskin upholstery on bucketed 
Seats laid bare its withered ribs, spouting foul smell in rain and sun; the rolling
Tyres busted for the wheels didn't spin down the familiar roads along the hill; our 
Eyes got sore at its lost lustre while we heaved deep sighs at its opulent maintenance
Divine providence intervened to refurbish the vintage for glorious view in the Museum



Contest Judged on June 26, 2016

July 1, 2016
For Broken Wings
Contest: I Got Zero, Nothing, Nada - 1

*Migrated rulers refer to the British rule in India

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/5/2016 10:44:00 AM
Hi Balveen, Congrats on your win! It was well deserved. 7:-)Alexis
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/8/2016 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Alexis for considering it well deserved! Love...
Date: 6/22/2016 9:10:00 PM
A 7 for this moving, bittersweet poem, Balveen. Janice
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Date: 6/22/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Janice!
Date: 6/22/2016 6:59:00 AM
The last line was a welcome relief ... Very well written ...
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Date: 6/22/2016 12:33:00 PM
It surely was welcome to us too! Many thanks, Probir!
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