Divine Pleasure

Seeing through emotions
And letting go of them all slowly one by one
devotion

Pain, happiness
Part of a life journey wholesome 
Deftness

Enjoy
Dusted and done
Boy

Seeing through emotions
Part of a life journey wholesome
Boy

Notes
Format of the New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU is as follows:
1. Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each)
2. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 
3. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of  stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3.
4. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting.
5. Syllable count : 
Stanza 1: 6,12,3 
Stanza 2: 4,8,2
Stanza 3: 2,4,1
Stanza 4: 6,8,1.
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George Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 10:59 PM
Great Minichu. Thank you dear friend for clarifying once more the specifications for writing this type of a poetic form devised by you.
Chutani Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 12:04 AM
Thanks Valsa, awaiting your reply to my soupmail. Pl. do so.
Kendrick Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 2:11 PM
Thank you, Mohan, for sharing this one with us showing exactly how to write the MINICHU. I appreciate the honor of placing in your contest. Your visit to personally congratulate me was nice. Sara K
Chutani Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 2:18 AM
Sara, Best wishes.
Onclaud Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 6:33 AM
remarkable work , flows well...ill try to work on a. a minichu, mohan!
Chutani Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 2:20 AM
Nette,Thanks. I will look forward to reading your Minichu. Best. Mohan
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 10:47 AM
Great poem and explanation of your form, Mohan
Chutani Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 7:46 PM
Thanks Andrea
Dutta Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 8:58 AM
Trying your contest. Have good days
Chutani Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 7:47 PM
Anisha, Thanks & best wishes.
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