Divine Fragrance

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Fragrance divine ineffable Real; not a mere parable Suffusing form from head to toe Tender touch inimitable Once softened attention mellow Presence beholds how love hues grow Poised in stillness, unexpectant Reaping fruits of seeds we did sow Erst fears and desires decadent Innocence here and now present Feels deep within, bliss magnetism Cognisant of heart radiant Bliss mists fill us, leaving no chasm Within this here, mind-body prism Boundaries blur, nodes within stir Synced with the divine pendulum 08-November-2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/9/2021 8:06:00 AM

Written in the style of the old masters, my favorite in particular - Coleridge.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/9/2021 9:03:00 AM

I must look up Coleridge … the Rubaiyat form is new to me, I like the cadence it generates by virtue of its geometry

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/8/2021 1:14:00 AM

How we need a divine pendulum.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/9/2021 9:05:00 AM

Feel the heartbeat, sense the subtle breath, taste the divine nectar, dance to the rhythm of magnetism, dissolve in the fragrance o& the bliss pheromone …