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DIVINE BREATH

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 02 NOVEMBER 2016, MY PICTURE, (c)

Divine Breath

Divine breath in me why have Thee imprisoned Thyself within the walls of the temporal? 







© Demetrios Trifiatis
   02 November 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 2, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Love these one line statements that cause one to examine one's self. I think I'm drawn to you because of them. I used to love Aesop as a young girl and kept a book of his writings. I believe the Divine does not imprison itself. It sojourns to teach us something and when we have learned we release it to teach others. God Bless, JB
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November 2, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Thank you dear, Judy, for liking Aesop I like him too and have got all his myths as well as, almost, all the writings of the main Greek philosophers, since I have studied and taught philosophy! It is a pleasure to receive your visit! PS: When the eternal is confined within the temporal only as an imprisonment could be seen!
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November 2, 2016 at 2:32 PM
sometimes we stay in that space which is ephemeral to enlighten us, demetrios.. such a glorious line..huggs
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November 2, 2016 at 7:26 PM
So nice to see you again dearest, nette! Thank you so much for the lovely visit.
Smith Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 12:09 PM
I wonder that as well...terrific question
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November 2, 2016 at 12:37 PM
It makes one more of us my friend, Tim! haha! Thank you for your dear visit my friend!
Gupta Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Beautifully done ... our hearts you won ...
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November 2, 2016 at 9:30 AM
You made me a happy man dear, Probir! Winning your heart is the greatest achievement! Thank you!
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November 2, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Brilliantly effective in a mere fifteen words! Gorgeous photo too, my first Questionku.
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November 2, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Sometimes is not necessary to use many words when something we wish to say could be better understood with few! I appreciate your visit and precious comment dear, Paloma! Thank you so much!
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November 2, 2016 at 7:03 AM
- Wonderful written - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 2, 2016 at 9:42 AM
Delighted to see you again my dearest, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for your lovely comment and grading! Hugs!
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November 2, 2016 at 2:51 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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November 2, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Thank you, Ravi, so delightful to see you!
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