Divine Breath

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DIVINE BREATH

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 02 NOVEMBER 2016, MY PICTURE, (c)

Divine breath in me why have Thee imprisoned Thyself within the walls of the temporal? 







© Demetrios Trifiatis
   02 November 2016

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Judy Ball

Date: 11/2/2016 5:18:00 PM

Love these one line statements that cause one to examine one's self. I think I'm drawn to you because of them. I used to love Aesop as a young girl and kept a book of his writings. I believe the Divine does not imprison itself. It sojourns to teach us something and when we have learned we release it to teach others. God Bless, JB

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/2/2016 7:22:00 PM

Thank you dear, Judy, for liking Aesop I like him too and have got all his myths as well as, almost, all the writings of the main Greek philosophers, since I have studied and taught philosophy! It is a pleasure to receive your visit! PS: When the eternal is confined within the temporal only as an imprisonment could be seen!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/2/2016 2:32:00 PM

sometimes we stay in that space which is ephemeral to enlighten us, demetrios.. such a glorious line..huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/2/2016 7:26:00 PM

So nice to see you again dearest, nette! Thank you so much for the lovely visit.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/2/2016 12:09:00 PM

I wonder that as well...terrific question

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/2/2016 12:37:00 PM

It makes one more of us my friend, Tim! haha! Thank you for your dear visit my friend!

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/2/2016 8:26:00 AM

Beautifully done ... our hearts you won ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/2/2016 9:30:00 AM

You made me a happy man dear, Probir! Winning your heart is the greatest achievement! Thank you!

Paloma P

Date: 11/2/2016 8:13:00 AM

Brilliantly effective in a mere fifteen words! Gorgeous photo too, my first Questionku.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/2/2016 9:33:00 AM

Sometimes is not necessary to use many words when something we wish to say could be better understood with few! I appreciate your visit and precious comment dear, Paloma! Thank you so much!