Divine Aid

A deep valley between of us
No possible way to her,
She said "It's all finished,"
"Humans rarely walk on air."
Down there among savage stones
All alone was a wooden boat,
I left nothing untried
Night was devouring the light,
Dusk till dawn I was weeping
But she seemed to be sleeping,
A heavenly voice stroke my ears
"I fill this valley with your tears."
In a sudden the boat was drifting on water
"Here you have the way, real lover."
I rowed across with a burning heart
Could hardly see, my eyes blind,
Only footprints, she was gone
Since then I only got the love of God.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 11:46 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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