Debbie Duncan Poet Free verse

Divine

The moon is up there 
                           Nearly every night 
                  Glistening off the breathing sea  
                     Where the fish are swimming 

                            From sea to sea 
                            And here I stand 
                           On the threshold 
                         Between two worlds
                        Of human and divine



wrote July 28, 2017,  6 pm

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Tom Valles June 7, 2026 at 6:14 AM Terrific write. You sum up the essence of this world exactly. Thanks for sharing your talent with us

James Inman December 15, 2019 at 5:33 PM A lovely write Debbie

Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 18, 2018 at 10:20 PM I love this threshold...too! Very nice visual poem Glad I met you. bbn

Carol Mays December 12, 2017 at 2:17 PM Beautiful images. I love it!

Suzanne C. Goudreau October 27, 2017 at 10:11 PM Beautifully creative Debbie! Enjoyed reading this enlightment!

Harry Horsman August 11, 2017 at 5:18 PM Awesome poetry Debbie..

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2017 at 7:56 PM you know what. I am gonna fave this. I came back looking for one to read of yours and fell on this again. It is short and sweet and so beautiful.

Adeyemi Joshua August 4, 2017 at 1:20 PM This intriguing and captivation....Lovely!

Maria Williams July 31, 2017 at 2:19 AM Wonderful write Debbie, I really enjoyed it....Maria

Andrea Dietrich July 30, 2017 at 8:59 PM and yes, gypsy woman. I remember it well. It was one of my very favorite songs back then in high school. I fancied myself the gypsy lady and the green eyed lady!

Andrea Dietrich July 30, 2017 at 8:58 PM wow, that is gorgeous, what a little gem you created, Debbie

Anne-Lise Andresen July 30, 2017 at 2:56 PM - Oh, so lovely Debbie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Estela Canama July 29, 2017 at 6:12 AM It feels good to read a refreshing poem like this. Thank you for sharing, Debbie.

Russell Sivey July 29, 2017 at 3:48 AM Such an enlightening poem Debbie! I really enjoyed reading this awesome piece this morning, you have written a stunning poem here! What a delightful write! Great Work!!