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When one line is not enough Poetry Contest

Divine

In the face of diversity...from its depths it rises above it all
Divinity...flawless and transparent... from the  soul...a tear


Written:  June 2, 2018
Author:  Elaine Cecelia George of Canada

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Al Juman

July 1, 2018 at 12:30 PM

In the face of diversity--- I like

Robertina B.

June 25, 2018 at 9:36 AM

So beautifully deep and profound, Elaine.. Very moving!! Warmest wishes to you..

Elaine George

June 25, 2018 at 11:21 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Robertina...and for your kind comments. Elaine

Kai Michael Neumann

June 25, 2018 at 2:36 AM

Very powerful and convincing. Kai

Elaine George

June 25, 2018 at 10:08 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Kai...and for your kind comments. Elaine

Robert Lindley

June 23, 2018 at 9:48 AM

Have just now found this beauty my friend! This sets me in awe in its creation, and magnificent truth... You have birthed a profound and divinely inspired light with these two golden verses!! A fav... and a great pleasure to read...

Elaine George

June 25, 2018 at 9:55 AM

Thank you for your very kind comments, Dear Robert; Much appreciated. Elaine

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 21, 2018 at 10:39 AM

A tear bowing to the Divinity! A great and profound write Elaine! Thank you for sharing. Stay safe.

Elaine George

June 22, 2018 at 9:51 AM

Thank you so much, Besma. Elaine

Cheryl Hoffman

June 20, 2018 at 8:48 PM

A beautiful verse Elaine; belated congrats to you on a well deserved win!~Che :)

Elaine George

June 22, 2018 at 9:51 AM

Thank you so much, Cheryl. Elaine

Silent One

June 19, 2018 at 8:54 AM

Hey Elaine... Hope you are ok..

Elaine George

June 20, 2018 at 8:44 AM

Yes! I am. Thank you for asking. Elaine

Nette Onclaud

June 14, 2018 at 7:40 AM

i was betting on this one!... big congrats, elaine!

Elaine George

June 20, 2018 at 8:44 AM

Thank you Nette.

Line Gauthier

June 9, 2018 at 10:04 PM

Lovely, Elaine. Congrats on your top win.

Elaine George

June 12, 2018 at 2:21 AM

Thank you so much, Line. Elaine

Eve Roper

June 4, 2018 at 11:02 PM

Great inspirational verse, Elaine, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Elaine George

June 9, 2018 at 12:20 PM

Thank you for stopping bye, Eve...and for your comments...much appreciated. Elaine

Susan Gentry

June 4, 2018 at 9:17 PM

Oh this one got me. Congratulations on your win with these profound two lines!

Elaine George

June 9, 2018 at 12:21 PM

Thank you for stopping bye, susan...and for your comments...much appreciated. Elaine

Kim Rodrigues

June 4, 2018 at 10:35 AM

Many thoughts conveyed here! Congrats, Elaine!

Elaine George

June 9, 2018 at 12:21 PM

Thank you for stopping bye, Kim...and for your comments...much appreciated. Elaine

Joseph May

June 4, 2018 at 9:00 AM

Congrats on your win Elaine..

Elaine George

June 9, 2018 at 12:22 PM

Thank you for stopping bye, Joseph...Much appreciated. Eaine

Mick Talbot

June 4, 2018 at 8:48 AM

Thanks for stopping by and your kind words. Congratulations on your second place Elaine. Mick

Elaine George

June 9, 2018 at 12:22 PM

Thank you for stopping bye, Mick...much appreciated. Elaine

Richard Lamoureux

June 4, 2018 at 8:36 AM

You made excellent use of your two lines. I expect this will do well. Hugs Rick.

Elaine George

June 9, 2018 at 12:23 PM

Thank you for stopping bye, Rick...and for your comments...much appreciated. Elaine

Richard Lamoureux

June 4, 2018 at 8:37 AM

In reading other comments, I see I am late to the party. Congrats on your win.

Winged Warrior

June 4, 2018 at 8:29 AM

Beautifully crafted my friend...a joy to read and Congrats!!! on your win!...love & light...^WW^

Elaine George

June 9, 2018 at 12:23 PM

Thank you for stopping bye, Winged Warrior...and for your comments...much appreciated. Elaine

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 4, 2018 at 8:09 AM

- Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George

June 9, 2018 at 12:24 PM

Thank you for stopping bye, Anne-Lise. Elaine

Janice Canerdy

June 4, 2018 at 8:00 AM

SO lovely, Elaine--CONGRATS! Janice

Elaine George

June 9, 2018 at 12:24 PM

Thank you for stopping bye, Janice...and for your comments...much appreciated. Elaine

Harry Horsman

June 4, 2018 at 7:45 AM

Oh yes a tear, i should have know,,how this reminds me of the best of all the wonderful poetry, i've read, Called 'Broken Eyes,' nothing as ever touched me, like the day i read that poem...

Elaine George

June 9, 2018 at 12:25 PM

Thank you for stopping bye, dear Harry..and for your kind comments...much appreciated. Elaine