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Diversity of Flakes

a gentle sprinkling they look tasty should i catch one on my tongue? i catch myself thinking hard now is it winter Is it icy and cold? Is there snow on the ground Or is it coming from a cardboard box? Am I outside or am I in the laundry room? it makes a big difference

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Date: 9/25/2021 11:52:00 AM
Oh, yes it does. Those laundry flakes do not chill to the bone! It does make a big difference, and I hope you didn't try them on your tongue.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/26/2021 3:58:00 AM
I do not even use detergent; my husband does and he uses liquid. This was for a contest.

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